Everyone Should Be Sheltered
By Roman
Houses play a Big part in life. They give you shelter, they protect you from rain
and hail but not all people have houses and this argument is about all people
should most definitely have houses.
and hail but not all people have houses and this argument is about all people
should most definitely have houses.
Heaps of people make advertisements and some of them showcase Houses,
Buildings, Restaurants, and People in poverty and most ads cost $10,000 plus
the editing would also cost 1 to 2,000 dollars which could have been used for the
homeless. Also, the Government could fund other projects.
Buildings, Restaurants, and People in poverty and most ads cost $10,000 plus
the editing would also cost 1 to 2,000 dollars which could have been used for the
homeless. Also, the Government could fund other projects.
On the topic of Governmental support, he also could fund for other projects
well such as Schools, University, and Hospitals because without funding for
these then no one would be educated enough to become Doctors or Teachers
and also with funding for these projects then people in poverty could be
properly educated.
well such as Schools, University, and Hospitals because without funding for
these then no one would be educated enough to become Doctors or Teachers
and also with funding for these projects then people in poverty could be
properly educated.
Everyone deserves to be sheltered from rain and hail because people become too
ungrateful for what they have and forget about people who don’t have anything.
But no matter that everyone should be sheltered no matter how much money they
have or don’t have because everyone would be happy in the end.
ungrateful for what they have and forget about people who don’t have anything.
But no matter that everyone should be sheltered no matter how much money they
have or don’t have because everyone would be happy in the end.
In conclusion, everyone should 100% sheltered because it could save money,
The Government could fund for other things, and everyone can be happy.
The Government could fund for other things, and everyone can be happy.
Hey Roman (you've obviously know who I am)!
ReplyDeleteWell, I've noticed that you've taken my advice as I commented on your other writing. Anyway, what interested me is how you've expressed opinion based on shelter. It really does play a critical role in life. For a little bit of improvement, you could make your sentences shorter (if that'll help, I sometimes forget to make my sentences slightly shorter). How long have you been at Pompalier school for?
I would be pleased to hear your answer.
Kia Kite ano!
Ruby-Rhain
Hi Ruby just letting you know I´ve been at Pompallier for 7 years but I´m only a year 6 but I started at year 0.
DeleteI would like to try and make my sentences shorter I just have so much ideas and I try to put them in as fast as I can so that I don´t lose them.