My New Goals

My new goals for this week is sentences for surface features and organasation for surface features. The reason i need to work on sentences is to improve on my punctuation and story settings. I also need to improve on being more organized like I need to make my storys make sense, and also I need them to help me put my words in the right place. Example for organasation I use my paragraphs which group my ideas to together, I use appropriate linking words between my Paragraphs. (Words examples: hence, therefore, in conclusion, furthermore, as a result of, on the contray, nevertheless).
I miss a line between paragraphs.
I sequense some of my paragraphs in away that makes sense ( with a begining middle and a end).

most of my sentences are correct:
correct tense, correct subject/verb, make sense
I try to usea varietyof sentense structure
simple compond and complex.
I try to vary the length of my sentenses for effects.
I use varioustypes of sentenses. (for example statment, question, command, exclamation).
Oh also a maths goal is to work on my times tables and fractions because i have trouble doing them sometimes

My Litetracy Goals

My litetracy goals are spelling for surface features and for deeper features ideas.  Lets start of with ideas ideas is a deeper  features that sets you up for the next task and that helps you work out the answers quicker. Spelling is a surface feature that people need to improve on including me and is also that when you write a story you need your reader to understand.

My Goal Setting

Today I'm going to talk about my goals that I'm useing for the week. My goal that i had in mind is my vocabulary (which is a depper feature goal). What I've done is try to us more intense words over the week. For example i was writing a metapor for my Mum and used words like expensive, lusciuos irriesitable. I also need to work on my vocabulary a bit more for example i didn't use it that much in most of my other story like i was writing a story about a tiger samuria where i only used words that everyone uses in there every day life like helped, brave, and smashed.

My second goal is a surface feature goal which is punctuation. The the reason i want to work on this topic is because i don't really use my full stops, speach marks and elpises. For example one i did not do so well we were doing free writing and I bearly use my punctuation. I also want to work on making my storys make sence.